Evaluation

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audience feedback

I asked my friend what she thought of my magazine and she said she thought it was very summery and obviously targeted towards girls who are in their teens. She said that i also need to justify my text and that i need to concentrate more on my text and colours.

someone else said that they thought it was cool and colourful and that they really liked how it was set out.
another person said it was pretty and really girlie, and that you can easily tell the target audience.

contents page, final piece

I have added more colour to this and have again rearranged it and have also made everything larger and brighter as to catch the readers eye, and also appeal to a younger audience. I have also changed one of the articles so it is the same as my final edit of my front cover. I tried to change and make the writing as even as possible but that was one of the difficulties I faced when re- doing it. 

front cover, final piece

This is my final front cover I have added some alternatives to the original, such as with the warm bodies text I had a picture where as now I have decided to have one for the summer deals text. I have also moved the writing for "we meet the girls from failing chemistry" as it was hard to read it where it was originally. I have changed one of the articles as well so this will also change in my contents page. I have made this page as bright as I can so that it stands out and have tried to incorporate more pictures than writing to appeal to a younger generation.

double page spread, final piece

This is my final piece for my double page spread, I've rearranged it and have made the interviewer questions pink. I have also added extra pictures. I feel this looks better as it is set out in a more easier way then the last one.